Dystopian Tuesdays Snack Shack Pickup

Well, in such scenes I've always preferred seeing both character's facial expressions. A simple T&A shot may do it for most viewers, but I wanna see a reaction. Is she smirking, grimacing, or smiling calmly? Who knows? But I'd be more interested in a reaction than the beauty shot.

If the camera position was moved more to the counter-clockwise from her position and the guy's hair parted on the other side, it might make more of an impression. Although you'd probably lose the guy running the counter, you could add a waiter/waitress somewhere behind the "douche-bag" as you call him....